Lyrics To A New Song I wrote..Let me know what ya think?

[A Katt Named Raggz]

Here is some lyrics I wrote for a song in the works...Let me know what you guys think.
Oh, and these lyrics are copyrighted...hehe
I will sale though!


Tonight I'll Sleep

Touch this Hand and Touch this soul
Whiskey angels dont' let go
No wings, Can't touch the sky
But the Lord knows I can cry
Teach this heart, Teach if ya can
Take this pride and make it stand
Living dead-blind to see
Lookin' at a world that used to be

Tell me what I'm gonna do
When my soul's been let astray
And I can't find yesterday

Tonight I'll sleep
On roses and rusted promises
No time for drying tears cuz tomorrow I'll be fine
Tonight I'll sleep
On saviours and cheap cigarettes
No time for drying tears cuz tomorrow I'll be fine

Touch this Hand and Touch this soul
Whiskey angels dont' let go
No wings, Can't touch the sky
But the Lord knows I can cry
Yeah the Lord knows I can cry

Tell me what I'm gonna do
When my soul's been let astray
And I can't find yesterday

Tonight I'll sleep
On roses and rusted promises
No time for drying tears cuz tomorrow I'll be fine
Tonight I'll sleep
On saviours and cheap cigarettes
No time for drying tears cuz tomorrow I'll be fine

copyright(C)marcwc68/2004

[kandikaos]

I'm hoping you got replies in PM's because It's hard for me to believe no one would reply to this Marc. The song is going to be awesome. I love the lyrics. I think you should do a recording of this yourself even if you do not sell it. Good job.

[Stacey0471]

I heard a rough sample that Marc recorded while he was in pain, lol. I'd be interested in hearing it when he's fully loaded on meds. [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Just kidding bro! Did Gene offer you the support slot yet? LMAO!!!

[SPIN DIZZY]

NICE

[A Katt Named Raggz]

Thanx Gang!!!
[email protected]ha.

Okay the whole idea for this tune is about Alcoholism. It's about the need for the juice...and it's taking over your life to a point where you have no clue what reality is anymore.
Hince the lines about the "soul being led astray"...to the saddness of not knowing what happened yesterday or any other day.
It was basically written over a point of watchin Alcohol taking my grandfather's live that drove him to his death. So yes, ver touching and agonizing tune.
The style is more of a Hard Rock Bluesy number in a midtempo song ala Tattoo Rodeo.

[Sherri Sixxx]

It s very touching Raggz.Many peeps can identify with this,which makes it a killer(in a positive way).It would make a very good ballad,or even acoustic type thingy,with lyrics easily hearable.
Wow!

[JayStarr]

Marc, I'd pitch it to a country performer. If not that, at least a "country-punk" band, they seem to like the confessional type material. Anyway, it's not bad.

[Andii Vamp]

Alwayz loved Raggz' lyricz... great stuff buddy! Maybe you can play me a rough version down the phone one night mate:>

[A Katt Named Raggz]

Sure thing Andii Buddy.
And thanx to everyone for the positive vibes.
Also, I did send a tune to Lelsi Sanders for Pretty Boy Floyd cuz it was pure PBF after I wrote it.